aaj sandhyakalchich gosht... mi CCD t baslele...ektich maitrinichi vaat pahat hote... as usual ajubajuchya lokancha nirikshan chalu hota... sagli tarunai CCD t lotali hoti... tyatun sunday! saglyancha hakkacha bhataknyacha divas ani sandhyakali 7 cha prime time... alot gardi.. pan eka koparyat TI ekitich basaleli..apratim saundaryvati!! tashi young hoti..pan married hoti ani ugachach pokt vatat hoti..arthat tichi body language ch aajubajuchya teenagers chya manane mature vatat hoti...
atishay sadhasa cotton cha pink dress tichya gorya rangala jast ch khulun disat hota... itki simple ani itki sundar... mala ugachach curiosity vatayla lagali...itkya sundar mulishi lagn kelela manus kasla lucky asel... anyway mala dusra kahi udyog navta...so I started observing her... TI konala tari sarkha phone karat hoti..pan samorun kahich pradisaad yet nasava.. tarihi jamel tevdhya thandpane ti parat phone karat hoti...
itkyat TO ala...mhanje mala to TO vatla... khup decent ani kamalicha handsome!! TI tyala pahun khup ashcharyane udgarli..."arre,tu ikde kasa? kadhi alas?"
mhnbaje maza andaj chukla....to TO navhta...
TO.."aga diwali t alelo... tu kashi ahes?"
TI.... "mi kay majjet...ektach ala ahes ka?"
TO..."ho..bayko baher gelye...mhatla kay karu ghari ekta....alo ikde!!"
TI..."ho ka? kadhi zala lagn?"
TO..."aga 4 mahine zale... tula bolavnar ch hoto...pan rahun gela.. tu contact ch thevla nahis lagnanantar...number sudha badalalay tuza..."
TI...."contact thevla nahi mhanje tasa tharlach hota na..."
TO..."ho mhanje... ajun ajibat badalali nahiyes...still u r straight forward...btw tu ekti kashi? sameer yetoy ka? mi toparyant ikde baslo tar chalel?"
TI..."ho...bas ki...sameer yeil ch itkyat... magachpasun sarkha phone karatoy...mhanala..ekti ahes na...kalji vattye...mi traffic madhe adakloy g..yeto 10 minutat..."
attaparyant 10 minutes zaleli...mi pan mazya maitrinila phone try karat hote... pan to kahi lagat navta... mala tichya khotepanacha hasu ala... pan mala to khotepana patla... kontihi stree apan khup sukhat ahot ani maza navra mazi prachand kalaji gheto asach kangava karte...rather 90% mulina ti gosht avadate... tyanchya gappa suru hotya... mazi khup chidchid zaleli..mazi friend kahi yet navati... itkyat mazya maitrinicha phone ala..ti solid traffic madhe adakleli ani ajun tila yayla minimum 20 minutes lagnar hoti.. mag mi maza morcha (rather kaan) parat TI ani TO kade valavla...
ata vishay faar intense vatat hote...tyanchya cheharyavarche bhaav tari nimishat mala tase vatle...
TO..."tula kay vatla,tu sangitla nahis tar mala kalnar nahi? its ur 1st anniversary...right?"
TI..."ho...tuzya kasa lakshat? mhanun tar velat vel kadhun amhi baher padlo...anayase ravivar ala"
TO..."mi kasa visaren...mi alelo na lagnala.. tyanantar aaj ch bhetatoy..."
TI..."hmm... kharach ki... ani shevati.. (motha pause)"
TO..."bol na... anj shevati mi pan lagn kela...asach na?.... aga kay karnar... fakt svatapurata jagta yet asta tar kay hava hota ajun? ghar...parents... samaj... kay karu? yancha vichar karavach lagto..."
TI..."hmm... hach vichar mi tevha kela... tula nahi patla..tu chidlas...mala hava tasa bollas..pan ata patatay na?"
TO..."hmmm... mi veda hoto g...ani ajun hi ahe...titkach..."
ticha phone vajla...bahutek sameer...ticha navra hota...ani to yeu shakat nasava...tichya dolyat paani taralala...
TO..."aga kay zala? kon hota? sameer ka?....sang na g!! kay zala?"
TI..."kahi nahi jau de...savay ahe mala...he has some imp urgent meeting...unofficial ahe..pan he will be late.. jau de.."
TO..."bara...pan mi ahe na? r u ok? u r comfortable with me...isn't it?"
TI..."hmmm... I was always comfortable with u.. sorry for crying...i didn't meant to embrasse u...u must be awkward.. sorry"
TO..."mala mahitye g... tu ajun tashich ahes...vedi... tell me one thing... r u unhappy?"
TI..."its not the case that I am unhappy...but I can be happier.. rather I deserve to be happier..."
TO..."ata tuzyapasun kay lapavu..i feel the same way...I kno we deserve each other....but we cant help it"
TI..."jau de re... punha kay tech tech ugalaycha.. tula jamta re...tu kiti sahaj mokla hotos mazyakade... mala nahi jamat... mhanje mi jamavun ch ghet nahi..pan mala nehmi asach vatat ala ki u deserve the best"
itkyat mazi maitrin ali.. ani tichya gappanchya tsunami t TI ani TO chi gosht ardhavat ch rahili... tyancha final decision...tyanchya discussion ch conclusion mala kalu shakla nahi... but i wish both of them will be happier than they r right now...coz they really deserve to be happier..
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sexy lihalai...ha blog adhi peksha khup interesting ahe majha ali vachayala
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hey its nice yar..the atmosphere creation is awsum..u can visualise the scene..bt donno y, i think..it was nt necessary to show her hubby as villan..infact it wld hav been interesting if it was that she is virtually happy but still waiting for her love....
ReplyDeleteno adu its totally wrong..because of that only twist come in to picture
ReplyDeletesarv..there can not b nething like right or wrong in any incidence telling...its not any theoem after all..what i told was my view on the piece and what i percieve as interesting..btw ketu keep writing more such stuff.. :)
ReplyDeleteyes i want to tell u d same thing what i feel .
ReplyDeletekhup mast aahe ... picturization khup chaan prakare kela aahe.
ReplyDeleteFab work!!!!! keep gng....!
ReplyDeleteawesome yaar.. keep writing such things..i m ur fan after reading this.. really good!!
ReplyDeletecchan lihila ahe...To ani Ti tula next sunday la parat bhettil ani amhala story cha next part aikayala milel hi apeksha :)
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ReplyDeletehey excellent work yaar!!!... nice to see you blogging.. keep it up!!!
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